A Limerick for Adam

[Sonnet]

There once was a man named Adam

Who tries to show us the way

He's outspoken and honest

And sure knows how to, "make hay."

 

He researches and has meetings

Til he's ready to pull his hair

But he keeps on truckin'

'Cause he wants to make us aware.

 

He's met with lawyers and bankers

And the best of the rest

He's got it already all set up

So we don't have to guess.

 

He's full of warnings and caution

And says, "use your silly head"

Don't rush into selling

'Cause you've been properly fed.

 

I've given you the best advice

About the IQD

And explained the common snares

And you should clearly see.

 

There are gurus and liars

All around the net

I would not trust them

Not even on a bet.

 

He calls himself a cheesehead

And gives us all a laugh

He's really our best buddy

And keeps us from a gaff.

 

He pulls no punches and tells us to wait

Don't be a fool and fly out the gate

Hold on until it's real and I will let you know

When the RV is ready, I'll tell you where to go.

 

So I thank you Mr. Adam

And hope to see you soon

I'm praying and paying attention

And not listening to the doom.

 

So I bless you, bless you

For helping us all out

And soon we'll be sailing

"Cause of the things you do!

 

 

 

[boosterbglee]

All we need is someone to put notes to it and ..voila....we have an RV song!  

[tankdude]

hmmm....I'd say you're poem format is more of a Rubaiyat.  *lol*  Sorry - I was an English Writing major.   I do second the sentiment - so for content, I will give you an "A". 

 

In the spirit of education - this is the technical definition of a Limerick

 

It is a 5 line poem

Lines 1, 2, and 5 rhyme.

Lines 3 and 4 rhyme.

Lines 1,2, and 5 have from eight to ten syllables

Lines 3 and 4 have from five to seven syllables.

So - If I may

A man named Adam Montana

is truly a top banana.

With advice and news,

he shares his own views

and warns us of dinar propaganda!

[yendor]

A final verse might be added.....

 

 

    So Mr. A.M. if you believe

    we will all jump for  glee

   if you could just make it be

    at long last. this week, an RV !

    

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

S

[bigwave]

hmmm....I'd say you're poem format is more of a Rubaiyat.  *lol*  Sorry - I was an English Writing major.   I do second the sentiment - so for content, I will give you an "A". 

 

In the spirit of education - this is the technical definition of a Limerick

 

It is a 5 line poem

Lines 1, 2, and 5 rhyme.

Lines 3 and 4 rhyme.

Lines 1,2, and 5 have from eight to ten syllables

Lines 3 and 4 have from five to seven syllables.

So - If I may

A man named Adam Montana

is truly a top banana.

With advice and news,

he shares his own views

and warns us of dinar propaganda!

Tankdude - impressive.

[Sonnet]

Thanks Tankdude for the correction. I write sonnets (both Shakespearian & Italian) & poetry. I always want to learn more so this is good.

I love your addition at the end. Lol

Thank you Boosterbglee & Yendor. Love your add on! Tee Hee!

[DinarThug]

I Was Out With My Girlfriend Named Jeanie

When I Accidentally Spilled Some Gin On My Weenie !

I Thought That Was Uncouth

So I Poured On Some Vermouth

And Then Slipped Her A Dry Martini !

[skeetdog]

Gunny...Quit it, your makin' me blush...Ya got any bedtime stories...I wana hear a bedtime story...Gunny read us a bedtime story....

[boosterbglee]

Thugsz................you crack me UP!!   That must have been your "Rap" version!!!     

[nannab]

Great Idea Boosterbglee! It will be our national anthem for the

island's? that we purchase after the RV.

[fancy]

Love it Sonnet!!!  Thank you!!!  We have to put it right up there with the movie someone will make about Adam and us!! Even though we talked about it awhile back-I'm sure it's still on the table!!! 

[Sonnet]

Thank you Fancy - just got a "wild hair" & wanted to do something funny & especially thank Adam for his unrelenting pursuit on our behalf.

At any rate, I appreciate your posts & have a blessed day!

[blitzer]

HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA

 

I appreciate everyones contribution to this.  I am not a poet by any means, lol, sometimes, I sometimes, when i am lucky, become and a 'poet and don't know it', lol, but my dad is great at it, and so were you all!!!!

 

laughter and smiles are truly the stuff of legend and hope for us all.

 

THUG, lol, YOU are a monster.  hahahhahahahahahahah  And thank the gods that you are YOU!!!!!